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Part-2 

EXAMPLES OF EXTREME SENTENCES:

THESE ARE DISCRIPTIONS OF THE WORLD AS SEEN THROUGH THE EYES OF KEVIN STING WHO BELIEVES THAT TO HAVE ONLY ONE OAR IN THE WATER AT ANY GIVEN MOMENT IS FIRMLY ASSOCIATED WITH THE BELIEF IN THE PHILOSOPHY OF CIRCULAR THINKING. (HUH?)

NOTE: (NOW ABOUT ME)

Do not follow the simple examples of Punctuation shown in the 'Discriptions' List. My Literature teacher while grading my work felt that it would not be appropriate to give me an 'F' and so gave me a 'G.'

Thinking that mark stood for (G)reat, I left her class feeling satisfied that I had received the highest of awards. (Apparently I was mistaken.)

YOU MAY ALSO CHANGE KEVINS DISCRIPTIONS AROUND TO SUIT YOUR OWN STORY IDEAS, ETC.

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NOW THE SECOND PAGE OF DISCRIPTIONS:

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PERSONALTY:

62) He was a (short cocky little man), whose (beady eyes) could (cut a hole through your thoughts) if you didn't turn away from his (steely gaze) quickly enough....

 TRAPPED:

 63) The house seemed to restrain him like a (strong silken web.)

FACIAL FEATURES:

64) His face was (white, ) and felt (cold and clammy) to the touch....

65) ANGRY VOICE:

66) The mans' voice was (flat, metallic, unemotional, and non-feeling)...

FEELING TRAPPED:

67) He squirmed as if he were in (the grip of something evil)...

SELF-ASSURED:

68) The mans' eyes were (level and calm) almost quietly psychotic....

EMOTIONAL PAIN:

69) The (sadness in his eyes) revealed (the torture in his soul.)

 71) He eased into the harbor, parking in the shadows where he became almost invisible....

72) He soon felt like a blind man who had followed death without question as the black cloaked figure led him to the cemetery...

73) The bright illuminating car lights swept away the darkness, revealing an even darker form half hidden in the shadows....

FEAR IN THE AIR:

74) The strong smell of fear was everywhere. Growing up he had been told that only animals could smell fear, now he knew differently.

 STORM SOUNDS:

75) The torrent of black night rain lashed at the windows as the maddening storm driven wind roared around the doors and windows threatening to seek a way in....

STORM CLOUD MOVEMENT:

 76) The swirling angry clouds moved swiftly across the darkening sky...

ALONE WITH HIS DREAMS:

77) He had lived the long nights alone, but yet not alone; as his ghost dreams provided a certain disturbing comfort.....

RELIEF FROM THE HOT SUN:

78) The fiery hot sun was now obscured by (sleepy slow moving clouds)...

EXHAUSTED:

79) Weak and weary, he plodded on; but how much farther? His legs began to send signals of pain that caused him to wonder....

EXTREME COLD:

80) He raised one hand weakly, and waved it as if to brush away the cold, but the ice chilled air lingered. There would be no relief tonight.

PAIN:

DAYTIME TEMPERATURE:

82) The bright hot sweat of the day thrust itself foreward, feeling more like hot glowing embers from a dying fire...

INVISABLE and VISABLE:

83) He knew that he would be visible as an outline in the mist, but only if it shifted enough to allow the dim glowing rays of moonlight to pierce the cloak of white powder....

THE COMFORTING DARKNESS:

84) He felt very much at home in the darkness. It provided a quiet undisturbing comfort...

THE POWER OF RAIN/WIND:

85) The rain finally quieted its (noisy drumming) on the roof. But outside the (angry wind whistled) across the driveway stirring the puddles from their sleepy hollows....

DRIFTING FOG/EVER MOVING:

84) The drifting fog covered, then uncoveredthe shadowy figure as it continued toward him in the darkness...

FEELING EXTREME PAIIN

85) Eyes wide open, neck muscles bulging, mouth stretched wide, he tries to vent the terrible pain, but it will not happen this time; the scream is locked within his throat and will not....

CREATURE IN PAIN?

86) The wimper was disturbing, but the location of the creature would not reveal itself to the light....

SOUNDS IN THE DARKNESS:

87) The quiet scratchy sounds in the darkness caused his skin to crawl even more...

FROZEN WITH FEAR:

88) He became (frozen, immobilized) with fear.

SEARCHING IN FEAR:

89) He stared (unblinking) into the empty darkness....

RECEIVING A BLAST OF ANGER:

90) A hail of (hot salty words) blasted the quiet of the room, filling it with anger...

DEATH WOULD BE WELCOME:

91) (Schrill crys of pain and agony) were a constant here; and death was always welcome, though it seldom showed its'shadowy dark form'.....

MUTTERING TO HIMSELF:

92) He muttered quietly to himself, otherwise said very little else to those he met....

FEAR OF THE DARKNESS:

93) He was afraid of the night, and then fearful of being so frightened of something he never fully understood...

SOUNDS OF A CLATTER:

94) It was a (light clattering sound), but he had easily picked it up with his unusual hearing...

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100) He could now begin to make out the dull brown foothills in the distance....

FEELING EYES UPON HIM:

101) He sensed someone Stareing at him...

A SLIGHT REACTION TO A QUESTION:

102) He gave a (slight shrug,) not sure of how hfe should answer the question...

HOLDING IT ALL TOGETHER:

103) An (invisible web) seemed to be holding them all together...

NO FACIAL REACTION:

104) His (facial expression was dead, expressionless, and pale)...

THE SOUND OF SILENCE:

105) The quietness soon took on a very different sound, but still without sound; as surely as death follows the blind man to the cemetery...

DEADLY TORNADO:

106) It bit the earth in anger as it passed close to a farm house located on the property....

DANGEROUSLY CLOSE:

107) Something was telling him that he had waited way too long....

THUNDER ANNOUNCING THE STORM:

108) He heard the building rumble of thunder in the distance, a dark cloud of doom was appearing out of no where. That storm would soon be arriving at his location...

A DIRTY STRANGER ARRIVES:

109) Sweaty, grimy, ground in dirt covered the raggity stranger from head to toe....

A DEADLY, MENACING WHIRLING CLOUD WAS COMING:

110) The small houses that were clustered together would have no chance against the tornados' fury; and it was coming fast...

OLD WORN OUT FURNITURE.

111) He settled back deeply into the well used comfortable arm chair...

FEAR REARED ITS UGLY HEAD.

112) (AFRAID) He drew back from the scene before him.

TIME

113)  The moment hung suspended, as if the milky mist swirling before him controlled time itself....

ROMANCE

114) As his arms encircled her, the hunger she began to feel was alien but still irresistable as their lips met.....

115) The soft warm lips brushing tenderly against her throat were becoming more dangerous than anything she'd ever known. The heat building within her body that if left to continue on it's own threatened to erase everything that she had learned to say 'no' to. She knew that at that point she would be out of control. The question was: "would she care?" She knew that the answer was out there somewhere, but she also was positive that it was too far away to arrive in time to save her.....

116) They held onto each othfer in a desperate effort to save the moment, this time, this small uncertain piece of love, or lust, that each knew could and would escape like the faint tick of a wind down clock....

116-A) She was becoming unraveled, and she knew that she could not stop it. Tears began flowing down her cheeks. "God please help me!" she whispered....

END OF ROMANCE FOR NOW......

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STARING:

117)  He glared at them defiently....

SHORT ANSWER:

118) He nodded....

VERY SURE OF HIMSELF

119 He had a smug look about him...

FOOTSETEPS IN THE NIGHT:

120)  The steps behind him caught his attention. He turned suddenly, bthe darkness and the thick mist would not reveal the stranger...

LISTENING:

121) He cocked his head slightly to listen more intently to the whispered sounds from the shadows...

SMELL:

122) The odd smell filled his nostrils completely...

LIGHTNING:

123) ( A brilliant flash of fire split the night sky) and the thunder roared from the distance....

A VERY HOT SUN:

124) (SUN) The burning hot sun was still high in the sky and the heat was overwhelming...

AUTUMN:

125) The leaves on many of the trees were beginning to change. It wouldn't be long before the beauty of snow flakes filled the air. Winter was coming..

BODY DISCRIPTION:

126) Tall-Slender-gray blond hair thinning-clean shaven-blue eyes...

DAZED AND CONFUSED:

127) He walked out into the night, into the shadows. No one seemed to notice that someone they had known so well was leaving them behind for the darkness that lay ahead. He continued slowly toward a place that would be unknown to them; but a warm willing partner to some one who knew that it was more of a home than they could ever provide.....

AFTERNOON SKY/SHADOWS:

128) The grey afternoon shadows lay heavily across the wide expanse of the lawn in front of the little house. The late afternoon sun struggled to pull the night time clouds across the sky to close the day....